The Official Writing Challenge
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This was good. I was intensely anxious to see what happened next. Nothing like a near death experience to beckon our instinctive knowledge of crying out to the reality of God.
Love the ending too! :)
This was quite suspenseful. I had difficulties at times figuring out who was talking the MC or the mother. You put in so many details, I had a vivid picture in my head.