The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 489 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
08/12/10
I loved the contrast between the "Yesterdays" of the verses that traced back the history of the child and his parents, with the "tomorrow" os what would happen next. I thought your use of alliteration in some of the verses was good.
08/13/10
This sweet poem is such a reminder of how quickly time passes--a fact all parents deal with eventually. Good job with the rhyme, flow and message throughout.