The Official Writing Challenge
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08/13/10
Really well written story about the scape goat. Good knowledge of the event from the Bible and its significance. Craftily developed and presented. I liked your interpretation of this important memorial. Blessings. :)
08/13/10
I loved this story, not only because it was well-written (and it was!) but because I learned something new. I didn't know about the history involving the scapegoat. It makes me wonder how I've missed this in all my years of church and personal Bible study. Thank you so much! I really, really enjoyed this.
I've never been able to quite picture what this scene must have been like. You did an excellent job of representing it.
You did a great job making this Bible passage come to life. :)
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.