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08/12/10
Cute ending! E.J.'s sense of humor reminds me of someone I know.;)

Good, strong descriptions throughout. I like the way you carried the theme from his childhood, being comforted by others, into adulthood, showing EJ as the one to offer a touch of comfort.

08/13/10
I wanted to take E.J. in my arms and reassure him that he had done nothing wrong. My heart ached for him and all kids that suffer abuse from "sick" parents. I'm so glad your story included some of God's angels in disguise.