The Official Writing Challenge
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08/13/10
Very endearing memories of a loved one. A vivid piece on many stages of grieving. Well written description of random thoughts that bounce around in the mind when we lose a dear one.

A little too much emphasis of "I remember your touch"? Good writing and shows deep sensitivity. Blessings. :)
08/14/10
OOhh this is a beyond beautiful tribute to a lost love, although with your vivid descriptions it will never be a forgotten love.
08/15/10
I agree that this would be even better with a few less, I remember you touches, but for those of us who've walked in these shoes...it is a hauntingly accurate expression of such a loss.
08/19/10
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.