The Official Writing Challenge
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So much mystery and intrigue in this story. I like how you brought to life these characters and then showed how they fit into Rowena's life.
Wow, you packed so much into so few words with this very creative, interesting, entertaining and intriguing entry. Yep--I really liked it.
This story leaves me wanting to know more of Rowena's tale. What will happen next?

Other than a change of tense I noticed, ("Rowena slipped out the door and noticed the sun low in the sky. She must hurry home before darkness overtakes her."--overtakes should be overtook), perfect!
I'll second the "wow!" I love this story and the informational twist at the end! ...I'd love to see illustrations for this!
I really liked this mystery. Was fun to unravel all the connections. Well done.
Ah, a cutesy tale-can I call it that? It's just so adorably written! The tone and style is nicely done--congrats! ^_^