The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/10
So much mystery and intrigue in this story. I like how you brought to life these characters and then showed how they fit into Rowena's life.
08/12/10
Wow, you packed so much into so few words with this very creative, interesting, entertaining and intriguing entry. Yep--I really liked it.
This story leaves me wanting to know more of Rowena's tale. What will happen next?

Other than a change of tense I noticed, ("Rowena slipped out the door and noticed the sun low in the sky. She must hurry home before darkness overtakes her."--overtakes should be overtook), perfect!
08/17/10
I'll second the "wow!" I love this story and the informational twist at the end! ...I'd love to see illustrations for this!
I really liked this mystery. Was fun to unravel all the connections. Well done.
08/19/10
Ah, a cutesy tale-can I call it that? It's just so adorably written! The tone and style is nicely done--congrats! ^_^