The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/10
I loved the structure of your poem and the way you gave animation to the various aspects of nature. I felt the restoring peacefulness of the scene. There were one or two places where the phrases were just a little cliched.
08/12/10
You nailed the topic through your descriptions of nature. I felt relaxed and calm when I finished this piece. Thanks.
08/15/10
Love the creativity in your wording. I love how you expressed God's touch through his creation.
08/19/10
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.