The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/10
Absolutely heart-breaking! Your descriptions made me feel as though I was there. Such good writing, but what a sad story!
This breaks my heart, not just the story itself, but the realization that there are way too many Julies in the world.
Great scripture to go along with this sad but too true story. You did an excellent job making the reader feel as though they were the MC.