The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/10
This tender story told through each generation touched my heart. The title is perfect as the apple tree almost feels like one of the characters in this piece. This one gets a vote from me.
08/13/10
And another vote from me. Just lovely.
08/16/10
This is an outstanding life story. You did a great job with the descriptions. When Andy fell from the tree you described it just as the MC would have, that really drew me more into the story.
08/17/10
I loved this story. You touched many emotions and gave the characters life through realistic dialogue and vivid descriptions.
08/17/10
I love this story! You gave meaning to some very important emotions, however subtle. Good job!
08/19/10
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.