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08/13/10
Your entry certainly dealt with the topic. Very scriptural and a good tool for evangelization.

I feel the first two paragraphs were fill and not necessary for the topic. Also there is some redundancy in regards to testifying about one's faith. Great grammar and punctuation and a writer you are becoming. Blessings. :)
This is a good devotion. You put a lot of facts and backed up what you were saying. it might have been more effective if you described each step right after you listed them. beautiful prayer.
I love the thoughts you have put forward here. For me, I think the first two paragraphs are unneccesary as your third one brings in the subject very well. I am wondering if illustrating 4 points is too much in a short writing piece. Maybe focusing on the main point.... there are times that God wants us to take a step towards him, to reach out and touch Him.. would give a more direct punch to this devotional. Well done.
I found the first two paragraphs to be very interesting, but had a hard time tying them into the rest of your article. Perhaps, as often happens to me, you just had too many good points to make. ;) Still, I enjoyed this article, and am glad you brought up this Bible story in the touch topic. It is one of my favorites.
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