The Official Writing Challenge
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This poem really has so many emotions in it. You did an excellent job with a hard subject.
08/14/10
Very poignant. Very clever.
I too have felt these emotions first hand. Backsliding spouses are so powerfully oppressive as we tumble and stumble in the remembrance of what they can and used to be, but continue to walk under the enemy's hand and fling their pain. Great job on conveying the ugly truth of this dilemma.
08/19/10
It ache my heart to hear such a sad account of abuse and domination, one that only God can heal. You have conveyed the feelings and agony in your writing very well. May the loving heart of God finds you embraced in His gentle hands.
08/26/10
Powerful, emotional, heartbreaking piece. I feel the pain when I read this and it is heartbreaking.