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08/12/10
A familiar story was brought to life. I liked how you used another story to provide the rising faith for the woman to seek out Jesus. I loved the understatement of "ordinary man" to describe Jesus - and how he turned out not to be so ordinary at all.
08/12/10
I always enjoy reading entries that bring Biblical stories to life in such a real way. This accomplished that with easy dialogue and giving personality to the MC.
I've always loved this story in the Bible; your re-telling of it brought me to tears. Love the title too!
08/18/10
Beautifully and graphically told - just wonderful. Thank you
You did a wonderful job filling in the details. I could easily picture her anxiety and faith.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.