The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/10
How exquisite you write! I'm so in awe. This is just wonderful. The 'touch' above all touches and you gave it new life. Splendid!

Mona
08/13/10
You wrapped the topic beautifully around your words of rhyme. Excellent flow and of course, the message of faith is driven home with this one.
08/18/10
How I love this story! It was told beautifully in your poem. Great rhyme and perfect rhythm. Your last stanza brought it up to today. His touch is still powerful and His invitation still stands. lovely.
08/18/10
What a wonderful poem - so right for this topic. Just beautiful.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.