The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great way to describe the activities that go on in a house. Good insight and great descriptions.
How interesting. I felt sad when I realized your characters had to sell their house because they were getting too old for the stairs, but I'm glad they had so many memories to look back on. Good job!
08/10/10
I like their trip down memory lane. Good story-telling.