The Official Writing Challenge
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As a person who sweats a lot in any temperature, I could so empathize with the MC. The last paragraph sums up how life should be perfectly. Add a scripture and this would be a devotion worthy of any devotional book/magazine.
I agree. This is a great story with a very appealing MC telling it.
It's funny how children often have just the right thing to say. Thanks for a great story.
I LOVE the MC. And I LOVED the story. Your entry is one that is bound to place! Good job!
Encouraging words make our day. Your story has the same effect. Good writing.
Great characterization of your mc. The message at the end was just right as well.
Amanda, I'm going to feature this in the Front Page Showcase for the week of January 31. Look for it on the FaithWriters Home Page--and congratulations!