The Official Writing Challenge
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As a person who sweats a lot in any temperature, I could so empathize with the MC. The last paragraph sums up how life should be perfectly. Add a scripture and this would be a devotion worthy of any devotional book/magazine.
08/05/10
I agree. This is a great story with a very appealing MC telling it.
It's funny how children often have just the right thing to say. Thanks for a great story.
08/09/10
I LOVE the MC. And I LOVED the story. Your entry is one that is bound to place! Good job!
Encouraging words make our day. Your story has the same effect. Good writing.
08/10/10
Great characterization of your mc. The message at the end was just right as well.
12/20/10
Amanda, I'm going to feature this in the Front Page Showcase for the week of January 31. Look for it on the FaithWriters Home Page--and congratulations!