The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely story of hope and dreams. I found myself crossing my fingers for Maria and her mom. I agree there's no place quite like the country.
08/09/10
A lovely, creative take on the topic with particularly beautiful descriptions. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
You write so well! I've never read anything you've written that I wasn't bowled over by. I loved this story because of its simple lesson that we can live in the most unpleasant circumstances and still find the fragrance of God so near to us. Very, very good job! As usual!
08/12/10
I have to agree with Mariane. Debbie, I am always in awe of your writing skills. The way you structure a sentence and use just the right descriptions. Yes, I love the story. But, I really love the writing. You inspire me to keep trying.

mona