The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/10
That story really warmed this grandma's heart. May God bless you as you share his love, Ruth
08/06/10
I liked the story, sorry about my above comment. I meant it for the previous story.Getting out was so what the person needed. May god Bless you.
This is a touching story of how depression can really grab hold of one. Thank God that He knows enough to send a friend at just the right time. Very moving and well done.
08/09/10
Your descriptions of depression paint such a lonely picture of this MC. So happy that Laura came along to rescue her. Perhaps God used her as His angel that day
08/11/10
You painted the picture of chronic depression very well. Good choice of words and images.
08/11/10
I could see, smell, taste, touch your mc's depression. You did an excellent job of showing how dark the world truly was for her. Well done.
I love the idea of "the fragrance of life" and its special meaning in your story.
08/11/10
The darkness of the piece is smothering and effective. I love the bright ray of a friend who won't give up. Good writing.

mona