The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/10
Oh my, I LOVE this! (If this isn't a winner I'll be mighty surprised.) Growing up a preacher's kid, I've long cherished those lovely old country churches, and even thought how wonderful it would be to own one to turn into a combination home and wayside prayer chapel. The sweetest touch of all was the fragrance of Jesus that greeted your home-buyers!
This is a lovely story. I was pulled right in by your characters.
08/10/10
Absolutely a true story...my husband and I considered buying an old church one time to fix up as a home. So I was delighted to find that's where they ended up as well. Great story telling, likable characters and strong dialogue. Well done in all aspect of this story.
Beautiful story! I love the mysterious scent, too.
What a great story! :) I'm glad your characters found just the home they were looking for. And I like how you showed us what the scent was through Zena's thoughts. Good job!
08/11/10
So sweet.It was a wonderful story for smell. Well done. Blessings, Ruth