The Official Writing Challenge
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There is no smell like a church. I liked how you described it as the smell of hope.
Church has always been a special place for me, too. :)
Beautifully written...I could feel and see all that your mc saw and felt. One small thing...I couldn't connect with why a church smell took you back to grade school but that's probably more my not getting it than your writing. Even so, I still like the tranquil feel of this piece and the hope that it gives.