The Official Writing Challenge
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You have such talent. The rhymes were wonderful and I envy your sense of rhythm, not to mention your wonderful sense of humour!
Cute and just the right touch of humor.
Good lesson here. Jesus loved the untouchables and the outcasts. We should, too, no matter what their appearance or smell.
Great poem and great message. I enjoyed it!
This is alot of fun, and a good message too.
How true. God's love conquers everything, including smells. ;) Good job!
I enjoyed following the family of uncouth as they received the smile of God through the preacher and his wife.
I loved it.Poor Old Uncouths.
Blessings, Ruth
Oh man! I guess I should go take a shower or you might be writing a poem about me next! Very cute poem! I'm most impressed:)
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level.