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This is a beautiful story of a grandfather and his grandson. And though I'm not a grandma yet, but I so understood what you said about them feeling needed and giving them a glimpse of what is to come.
08/05/10
Oh the wisdom of white hair! Well done!
Oh I loved the message in this story. What a wise Grandpa. Loved how sin and guilt and conscience was explained through using the sense of smell. Awesome.
08/06/10
Great analogies of guilt and conscious wrapped up in a sweet story. You did a good job developing the well-liked characters.
Great message! Great story! Good job! :)
08/07/10
I loved this creative take on the subject.

And the very last paragraph filled my heart with loving peacefull goodness.

Thank you!
08/09/10
Loved this - catchy title, creative and deep message. Your conversation is also very "real." It was a delight to read.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall.