The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/10
You managed to weave your message into your story so delicately, but strong enough so it wouldn't be missed. You did a great job in transitioning to the MC's distraught over her flower to her distraught over Leonard.
08/06/10
This has a powerful message wrapped in a well-told story. Great job.
08/06/10
Great message. I love how you connected dying humanity to dying flowers. Good job.
08/10/10
This is a very well-written and powerful entry. Your comparing the lost blossom with the "lost" young man was a priceless message. Great job!
08/11/10
Excellent devotional wrapped in a story. Your analogy is perfect.
08/11/10
I echo the others. So well done. Blessings, Ruth