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This was a great read. It took me a bit to realize the blue building was a church, but that's because I was so wrapped up in your fantasy. Great writing skills.
08/05/10
A creative and mesmerizing tale rich with symbolism, very well crafted.
08/06/10
Great fantasy...and it is indeed full of symbolisms. I didn't get it at first so began to look up the meanings of names and words. Intriguing story, a insister character, a dark forest, a hero and a heroine. Incredibly creative!
750 words is hardly enough for a good story like this. I found myself wanting to know more about the history of your world, who the villain was, and why trolls and humans were coexisting. Maybe someday you'll be able to turn this story into a novel. Good job!
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