The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/10
No rest for a sick mom. Cute story.
Haha, love this! Liked how you tied together the real smells with the dream.
Your wonderful dream story was tied together perfectly--each smell pictured clearly. I love this story.
This was filled with humor. It is true how our mind works in the smells and sounds into our dreams. Nice descriptions and a great story.
08/09/10
Enjoyed how the dream and real life merged together in this piece. The pace was perfect for a quick read and you stayed right on topic throughout the entire story. Two thumbs up from this reader.
08/12/10
Yvonne, this is just so special. As I read it, I felt so much like I was in the middle of the dream. How you were able to describe it so well is beyond me, but you did.
I really enjoyed this. I could feel her angst over knowing 'company came'.

Mona
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall.