The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a powerful suspenseful story with a wonderful lesson.
08/09/10
It is a gripping story and I couldn't have stopped reading it if I'd tried. You presented it very well, with the right amount of tension. Very good job!
08/10/10
Really good and well done.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall.