The Official Writing Challenge
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I so enjoyed the image of little Zoey sniffing out chocolate. And as much as I loved the second part, the two seemed like two very different pieces. My favorite part was the smell of goodness. The smell of newly laundered-hung on the line sheets is my idea of what heaven will smell like.
08/06/10
Cool...two stories for the price of one. Gotta love it. I enjoyed your chocolate story but really liked how you related the
Fruit of the Spirit with smells.
Really liked your scents associated with the fruit of the Spirit. Also got a good chuckle out of two year old Zoey being all woman with her taste for choclolate. :)
08/06/10
Very creative...and felt so welcomed by this read~
Nice
08/07/10
Mmmmmmm! I need to go find some chocolate.