The Official Writing Challenge
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This was an exciting story told from an interesting POV.
08/05/10
Very well done. I enjoyed the point of view. Good story for smell! Blessings
08/06/10
I like the drama and mystery of your story. Good job telling...I could see everything.
Very different (enjoyably different) with suspense that kept me wanting to know more. Great descriptions also. You had me right beside your MC up on those roof tops!
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall.