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This story is full of suspense. I found myself holding my breath, then chuckling. The love between the two characters felt genuine. A small editing note, instead of woe, in this case I think you would want to use Whoa, unless you were looking for a play on words. Overall a sweet, fun story.
08/02/10
Cute story. You have some typos but it didn't detract me from the story line. :)
Cute story!
Oh, the things we do to show our love. A fun read, for sure.
08/03/10
Enjoyed this interesting story about a woman's doting love and a man's careless bravado. Thanks! Colin
08/03/10
haha, had a similiar experience with my brother (minus the rocket) helping him deck a roof. He even got me a tool belt. At least you had a real ladder and not one built with scrap wood and rungs two feet apart ;-)

Enjoyed your story!
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 40 overall!
08/10/10
Oh, the things we will do for love, right? Could feel the love and suspense all the way through...even to the very end.