The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/10
Wow! Perfection! A wonderful story for this topic...a winner for sure!
The line that stood out to me the most from the first section is

"And man, oblivious, plans his course"

From the second section ... I'd have to say the whole thing! I loved the comparison you gave with us today, and Elisha then. A wonderful take on the topic! I, too, hope this places high :)
The last stanza really touched my heart. What a wonderful ending to a beautiful poem
08/02/10
Oh to always see through God's eyes. Wonderful poem and message!
Outstanding poetry--outstanding message--unforgettable story.
Genuinely superb!
08/04/10
I loved the poem and wished that I had written it!

"What can I see? With unscaled eyes
I see God’s Glory fill the skies."
08/05/10
Margaret... I want to tell you that this is one of my favorites for the week. I got chills reading this. It couldn't be more perfect.