The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow what a horrible scene for a child to witness and another child (jimmy) to go through. I can't imagine how this would affect a person. How wonderful to have a mother to pray over the MC until the bad dreams went away.
What a horrifying thing for such a young child to witness. I am glad that God saw fit to give her new dreams.
On an editing note, the first sentence is a bit awkward. I think it would read a bit more smoothly by putting the 1957 detail first. "In 1957, during my seventh summer in life..."