The Official Writing Challenge
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this is such a touching story. The ending surprised me, but then it shouldn't have given the way you described Jennie's strengths.
This story in itself could be a novel or a movie script - timeless, classic and inspirational.
08/05/10
You wrote my bio here (except I wasn't smart enough to be at the top of my class in high school). My mother always encouraged my writing and was my biggest fan. She kept some of my poems and stories until the day she died. I also laid down my "writing" dream and didn't pick it up again until after she died. Thanks for this encouraging story. It will keep me going for a long time to come.
08/05/10
A beautiful story. I enjoyed it. Congrats.
You presented your wonderful story so well, and surprised your readers with a powerful surprise ending. Excellently done!