The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/10
Beautifully done and such an accurate account. The poem flowed effortlessly as I read it.
08/01/10
Beautiful poem and right on topic. So full of love too.
08/02/10
Very cool POV. Love it!!!!
08/03/10
Wonderfully written with a beautiful flow and was awestruck with your mesmerizing POV. Awesome!
08/03/10
I like the all-encompassing nature of this. The contrast that begins your next to the last stanza (and with your title) is profound, "And then You turned Your face away..." Very nice work!
08/04/10
You've written a beautiful poem about our Lord with a glorious ending.
08/04/10
You rhyme was perfect, not one word was forced. I've read several lovely poems so far but this one is my favorite. I like how you laid out Jesus' life in the flow of your poem and how the Father was there with Him.
08/04/10
This is profound. It brings the humanity of Jesus so much to the forefront. It also breathes with the love of a father for a precious child. How great is the Father's love for us as well. How great the sacrifice Jesus made and paid. Absolutely spine-tingling!!
08/04/10
Precious and priceless. I love it.

Mona
08/04/10
An amazing POV, creative and definitely out of the box. But above and beyond that, the voice of our Lord sharing in a beautiful way His life and victory--well, it just blessed me in unexpected and glorious ways. Thanks for sharing.
08/05/10
I've already commented on your poem but wanted to congratulate you on your second place win. I knew this would do well...I've read lots more stories and it's still one of my favorites.
08/05/10
Congratulations on your level placing and Editor's Choice for this wonderful poem!
08/05/10
This is a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it. Congrats.
08/07/10
So unique and well done! Congratulations.