The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story. It took me a minute when it jumped from graduating to looking at houses with his wife, but I can be slow sometime.

I loved the irony of Jason looking into the same mirror that really started him on his journey to finding happiness. That takes a great deal of skill to pull off and you did it.
07/31/10
Thanks for sharing this journey of a man transformed by love...the use of the mirror was perfect and left a strong impact. Very well crafted.
08/01/10
Well-written story. My heart wept in the beginning and the end. It is hard to cover a long period of time in so few words. You did a good job of it. If only all abused children could find a happy ending.
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