The Official Writing Challenge
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Amen is the only thing I could think of that would do this wonderful piece justice.
08/02/10
I want what you want! Wow! I love this. Really truly:)
08/02/10
This was beyond gorgeous and brought tears to my eyes! Maybe I'm just sappy today, but I loved every line of this.
08/02/10
A gorgeous piece of writing - sounds wonderful doing some of the stuff you've written about. Hope you do well with this.
Colin
Lovely poem. I agree with all--I want to...too.
Although I'm not a musician, I could hear this to music. I really enjoyed how filled this is with enthusiastic optimism.
08/02/10
Lovely. Simply lovely.
08/03/10
I would LOVE to be able to listen to this as a song! It would be beautiful.
Amazing how we can want all this and not be greedy but be in God's will!
Lovely
08/05/10
Wow! How inspiring. Thanks for starting my day off with such an uplifting poem. You have quite a gift and are a gift.