The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent, I think this is a sequal to one I loved another time. The tie- ins were perfect of three blind mice. Was God getting to her or what.
I could see this as a book. Perhaps with Charlotte and the police detective teaming up to investigate crime and help people find Jesus.
You are most gifted. Blessings, Ruth
This is a great story of forgiveness and God's own mercy.
Really unique story here. Loved the tie-ins with the songs. This story could easily be fleshed out.
Great descriptions - you set the mood beautifully