The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great description of what children must have seen in the time of Jesus.
08/02/10
That had to have been an amazing, life-altering event for that young man!
08/03/10
Those loaves and fishes really were part of a miracle that must have been a sight to see! Good job with this story.
08/05/10
I liked the point of view you used in this piece. Good job.