The Official Writing Challenge
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This was an enjoyable read with a lesson in it for even today. So many people worship money, or power, but the Sovereign Lord is still the only true God.
Well...your entry got me searching to see if this was a true story. I can't find it. Please tell me, okay?

True or not, it's a good piece and a good message.
An enjoyable read with a good message.
Phee, I read through this a few times trying to pick up every nuance of your thoughts.
We serve a God who exists outside our human, natural dimensions, "immortal, invisible I Timothy 1:17, Sovereign and powerful.
We cannot see Him but we know He IS.

Loved the intrigue, loved the message!
I loved the priest's answer, "He sent the lions."
Evidence of God surrounds all who cannot "see" Him. Great take on the topic!
I am also curious if this is based on a real story! It rings true. Excellent writing, out of the box... and if it is fiction... VERY creative!
Wow! You've got to be one of the winners!! Great story writing. If this is original, sounds like the beginning of a good book to me. Take a bow. Well done.