The Official Writing Challenge
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This was an enjoyable read with a lesson in it for even today. So many people worship money, or power, but the Sovereign Lord is still the only true God.
08/02/10
Well...your entry got me searching to see if this was a true story. I can't find it. Please tell me, okay?

True or not, it's a good piece and a good message.
An enjoyable read with a good message.
Phee, I read through this a few times trying to pick up every nuance of your thoughts.
We serve a God who exists outside our human, natural dimensions, "immortal, invisible I Timothy 1:17, Sovereign and powerful.
We cannot see Him but we know He IS.

Loved the intrigue, loved the message!
08/03/10
I loved the priest's answer, "He sent the lions."
Evidence of God surrounds all who cannot "see" Him. Great take on the topic!
08/03/10
I am also curious if this is based on a real story! It rings true. Excellent writing, out of the box... and if it is fiction... VERY creative!
08/04/10
Wow! You've got to be one of the winners!! Great story writing. If this is original, sounds like the beginning of a good book to me. Take a bow. Well done.