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Wow this is just a stirring rendition of the story in the bible. It captured my heart and made me wonder why I don't have the faith at times. It seems so simple.
Such a clever title, and vivid description of this familiar scene from the Bible. Loved the words you chose for Peter's inner thoughts - so like all of us!
One of my favorite Bible stories written through new eyes. :) I think you did a good job portraying Peter, and what he would have felt out there in the storm.
Loved your take on one of my favorite Bible stories! It's so easy to take our eyes off Jesus and sink. This would make a great devotional!