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Wow this is just a stirring rendition of the story in the bible. It captured my heart and made me wonder why I don't have the faith at times. It seems so simple.
Such a clever title, and vivid description of this familiar scene from the Bible. Loved the words you chose for Peter's inner thoughts - so like all of us!
One of my favorite Bible stories written through new eyes. :) I think you did a good job portraying Peter, and what he would have felt out there in the storm.
08/10/10
Loved your take on one of my favorite Bible stories! It's so easy to take our eyes off Jesus and sink. This would make a great devotional!