The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed this story. Makes me think of how Paul needed the help of Ananias.
This is outstanding. I laughed so hard, tears were falling. You definitely have a niche for comedy, plus a nice message in between laughs.
Fun story, good dialogue, and I have a feeling there is more to this story than "meets the eyes"!
Great story. Loved reading it! You set it out well too.
Yes, a fun story - and very well-written. Seems like a chapter in a book, to me. More, please (and perhaps with the dragon's name?). Just the right amount of moral to the story, not preachy in the least, but the point is made through delightful scenes, dialog and plot.
Loved it. Great comedic touches and overall creativity.
Your title is perfect and your story super creative for the topic. :) I enjoyed this!
A fresh amusing story with a deep meaning of our dependability on each other, in our struggles with our enemy, whether we can see or not. Colin
Absolutely loved this well written, refreshing, change of pace, fantasy.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 40 overall!