The Official Writing Challenge
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I had a little trouble following this at first. It was hard to see where your MC was, and what he was trying to do. But your story is a great reminder of our fellow believers who need so much help. Thank you for this article.
You created a sense of danger and suspense that kept me reading. The message to follow God and he will tell us what to do is one many of us need to be reminded of. It seemed that maybe you were limited by the word count, but you still managed to get your message across.
Captivating story that seems like part of a larger work - and hopefully, it will be?! This has the heart of a missionary all over it, and gave me a glimpse into what it must feel like to minister "in the darkness" in both a literal and figural sense.
I liked the suspense and mystery you created - kept me reading to a very satisfying end.