The Official Writing Challenge
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beautiful poetry--beautiful message
07/29/10
This is really special, and I enjoyed it very much. Thought-provoking and well-written--just the thing to cover this topic beautifully.
Wow - Excellent title for an excellent piece.. how did you manage to make the whole thing rhyme like that and keep the powerful message. Great job!
Very nice! Two questions: First, who knew so many words rhymed with see? Second question is the same as previous poster: how did you get it to rhyme so wonderfully and at the same time, communicate an awesome message?
08/01/10
Wonderful! A really great poem. I loe the last two verses.
This is so beautiful and the rhyming was quite impressive.
08/02/10
Wow! Awesome poem - great idea!
08/03/10
Powerfully written message in perfect rhyme has me applauding this poem. Great job.