The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/10
Wow! Great story. Very touching. I love when you revealed who the narrator was at the end. :)
07/30/10
I didn't notice the title until the end and so you kept me guessing all the way through. I think that this is a very entertaining entry. Well done!
07/31/10
This is a lovely story and so touching. I puzzled a bit over who the narrator was I thought it was God, then maybe a sister, in the end I thought it was her mother, but I puzzled why she didn't see her daughter until she was 3 days old, unless she was adopted. But then sometimes I just slow on the uptake. The sentiment within the story is beautiful and that's what touched my heart.
07/31/10
So creatively clever. Great story. You had me guessing who was talking the entire time and loved Caroline being who own best confidant.
08/01/10
I'm sitting here with tears, and great appreciation for the tenderness and creativity of this story. Well done!
08/02/10
Very clever point of view:)
08/02/10
I enjoyed the tenderness in this well-written story. I guessed doll and stuffed animal...never would have guessed mirror. Clever!
08/02/10
This piece gripped me and kept me reading to find out who the narrator was. I was confused and it wasn't until I read the comments of others that I figured out it was the mirror. It's creative, but I think it could be reworked at the end to make the narrator more clear, but that's just me.
08/02/10
I think it's a great example of showing and not telling. Seems to me creative and well written. Good job.
08/03/10
You kept everyone guessing who the narrator was in this fun, sweet piece. I'm glad you made it clear in the ending lines.
08/03/10
May I just add "mega dittos" to the other comments? I had to read thru twice to get it. Congratulations on a great entry.