The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/10
Really enjoyed this story. I love the era - you captured it - good twist at the end - though sad!
07/24/10
Wow - I didn't see that twist coming! This captured my attention and I enjoyed it thoroughly - good work!
07/24/10
I thought when I first started reading it was going to be like several others that were similar. I was surprised by the ending and the forgiveness of the king surely showed who he worshiped. Great story with a meaningful message.
07/27/10
I didn't see it coming at all...the unfaithfulness of the food taster. It caught me off guard cuz' he was quoting scripture and saying all the right "stuff." I appreciate a good story that catches me off guard. Great story, indeed!
07/29/10
This was one of my favorite's, and wanted to tell you sooner, but work keeps getting in my way.

I envy how you can write in th eimagination of the past
07/30/10
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.