The Official Writing Challenge
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07/22/10
Your sweet MC won me over with her tasty advice. Good job.
07/23/10
Loved this. You portrayed wisdom, love and compassion in a really good story.
Wonderful character development here for a wise woman. The details of the story make it "taste" good.
07/24/10
Lovely - I enjoyed the way you equated the taste of cookies with the taste of men. This is something we should let our teenage daughters read!
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