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07/22/10
Wow. Intense. Heartbreaking. GROSS!

Great ending. Powerful.
07/23/10
Wow! It's so sad that this is reality for so many young people.
07/23/10
Wow! The desperation of your MC was tangible and heart-breaking. The despair felt by many over this issue is epidemic. Great work on this story.
This is so well done, eye opening and heart breaking. I hope you pursue getting this published. It needs to be circulating!
07/26/10
A haunting story of teenage insecurity and peer pressure. It's truly eye-opening.
07/26/10
You really brought you MC to life and gave an important message at the same time. Reading this reminded me of my own teenage years and the stories of girls who purged. This is really an epidemic in our society. Thank you for bringing attention to it in your writing.
Oh this is such an outstanding show of courage. It's hard to write the truth about how these things really do happen. I was riveted to the screen for every word. You really spoke the voice well. I loved the mom coming in and holding her in the end.
07/28/10
And it truly is that easy to get started. I'm thankful your mc cried out to God and then Momma showed up to comfort her. I felt your mc's pain all the way through. Well done.