The Official Writing Challenge
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07/22/10
Great job! Very real and creative. I can totally see this happening although that would be one brave teacher!
07/25/10
I could see this class shouting out all their answers along with banilla, and topatoes. :) I enjoyed your creative story!
What a wonderful lesson at such a young age...follow directions :) This was cute as I could see all their little faces adorned with excitement.
07/26/10
I know a bunch of kids like that. What a brave teacher. And what a fun story. Thanks.
07/26/10
I wish I had tried this when I was teaching preschool. Love the interaction between the teacher and the children. Darling story!
This was such a fun read and a great lesson. I could see teachers doing that with their class up to 4th or 5th grade. Delightful. I did notice a tiny typo near the end you said let them cook when I think you meant let them cool :) But still a fantastic story!