The Official Writing Challenge
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07/22/10
Wow, this is absolutely great. Makes me want to soar - literally.
07/22/10
What a wonderful illustration and testimony, and absolutely on topic!
A life lesson worth hearing. Good writing.
07/24/10
This is just beautiful! I'm so glad you found the freedom we have in Christ!
This touches me on such a level I can barely even think to describe the emotions rushing through me. So many husbands and others use religion as a pen, to keep people in and the outside world out. How wonderful to have a brother that wouldn't give up. This is told so vividly and will touch many people and change how they think.
07/25/10
What an encouragement to be all we can be in Christ...and with our heads held high. We are children of the KING! Beautifully done.
07/27/10
Yay for the brother. I was rooting for you the entire way.
What a powerful transition and timing when you get to the point where you say, "I had never known I was an eagle." It rocked! Congrates on your EC. Well deserved.
07/29/10
Wow, Joy.. just excellent (the story and your writing). Congrats on your Editor's Choice!
Can totally relate, sounds like my story. Very well done. Congratulations.
07/29/10
And now , dear Joy, soar on a new updraft. Higher she goes! Congratulations and this is a wonderful analogy and peek into the pen of many people's hearts.