The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/10
This was a thoughtful article and very well written. It caught my attention because, I, too, have a hidden chocolate stash!
This starts out with the drama of perhaps a serious eating disorder than moves to facing death. This is done so eloquently and the message is subtle. The ending makes your message quite clear for those who may not have caught on sooner. Outstanding job, it brought me to tears and made me take a serious look at my own life.
This starts out with the drama of perhaps a serious eating disorder than moves to facing death. This is done so eloquently and the message is subtle. The ending makes your message quite clear for those who may not have caught on sooner. Outstanding job, it brought me to tears and made me take a serious look at my own life.
07/25/10
Very tasty and yummy piece of writing. I must admit that I am a chocoholic. But then, I was once told by a doctor that dark chocolate is good for you.
07/27/10
Been there, done that! And I'm not just talking about the chocolate either. Thanks for the great message your story brought forth.
This started out almost humorous, but ended on a serious note. Somehow you managed to blend the two nicely. Well done.