The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/05
Well written and insightful. I love the contrasts you have bought to this piece and the challenge to ‘always keep your identity in sharp focus.’ My favourite image: ‘as fearful as a worm in the beak of a bird.’ Couldn’t get more helpless that that! Thank you, Yeggy
09/14/05
This traveler's blessing is full of grace, and beautifully written.
09/17/05
Well written! We are all travelers on this road of life seeking the prize of the high calling at journey's end in heaven. It reminds me of "The Pilgrims Progress" by John Bunyan.
Suzanne, I can hear and see this being done in church as a send off for a 'traveller' with different people popping up from different seats for each phrase. Some repeating lines could be unison. Just a thought! I really like it!
09/17/05
Beautiful words of wisdom - even to those of us who journey only to the grocery store:)
09/17/05
Very good writing. Nice!
09/18/05
and not a truer word spoken. always blessed as long as you're with the Lord.
09/18/05
Very lovely!