The Official Writing Challenge
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07/22/10
You are a great writer, and I'm sure your pastor will tell you that you did justice to this story.
07/22/10
A great story, well told. Thanks for sharing it.
07/23/10
Your writing alone is excellent, but I loved how this story drew me in and made me FEEL - for both the storyteller and for the son of the man he killed. I enjoyed this very much!
07/24/10
This is such a touching story, a sad reminder of how many thousands, millions of people have made that deadly mistake.

On an editing note, You used your instead of you're when David said it was no surprise.

But the words gave me peace and the fact that it is based on a true story gives me hope for those I love. Thank you for sharing such a difficult story.
07/27/10
Great story. You did a great job with the characterization and voice of your mc. I was with him all the way.